
The death of love’s doctrine
Was a pain to behold
We watched it fade in our children
And wondered what signs we missed
What lessons were mistaught
For how could a Truth so strong it seemed eternal
Wither to dream and fairytale
Was it the dawn of self-love
Misunderstood by many, though not all
Awakening selfish trends
Ambitions that overlooked compassion
The Self at the expense of the bond
For who said one cannot love oneself
and still have love to spare for another
They tried to burn those words we hoped would guide them
But the flames blew out
For the winds of change
Would not accept this change
Love’s doctrine would survive.
Tall Tales Corner

An antic chandelier From an age of mystics Its crystals glisten with light so soft it feels like starlight and yet so loud that when the wind gales and the crystals chime their voices wail So flip that switch with caution Lest you're trapped stargazing Or rather, soul-gazing For in perfection we find the darkest secrets

Hope you enjoy these. For Sadje’s whatdoyousee and Caley’s writephoto.
Looking forward to your thoughts…
Shalom
Namaste
Namarie
I love both your poems Jude. But the first one gives such a powerful message. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you so much, Sadje. Yeah, the 2nd was deliberately lighter. More on the fun spooky side. Great prompt.💖
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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Wonderful poems, Jude! It does feel as if society has strayed from love’s doctrine. Hopefully, enough of us still live by its message for others to learn.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thank you so much, Yvette. Yap. Hopefully.🙏🏾🌼
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Oh i love both poems but if i am to choose i’d pick the first one. It gave me chills reading it.
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Thank you so much, Michelle. Means a lot.
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Love’s doctrine…what a thought-provoking take, Jude!
And a wonderful second poem too.
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Thank you so much, Punam.🌼
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Beautiful poetry as usual, I agree, we can use it as much as we want and still some left.
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Thank you for appreciating, Elizabeth.
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I believe also that love will survive. (K)
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🌼🌼
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Lovely poems, Jude
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Thank you so much, Michaela.
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Powerful, and image provoking. Nicely done, Jude.
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Thank you so much, Mason.
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I love both poems, Jude. The first poem sends a beautiful message!💖
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Thank you so much, Eugi.
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My pleasure, Jude!
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Your first verse kind of reminds me of the ‘Puss in Boots’ animated movie I just saw.
The lesson (partly) to be happy with what you have.
It is difficult for some parents not to pass on their prejudices, though they try not to.
And that is where the child must go beyond the boundies of the old and help to heal the new – with acceptance and hope.
Your second verse could be the intro to a fantastic tale of reflection and capture… into another world. Like Alice’s looking glass. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Jules. I’m not too familiar with love prejudices, but the foundation for a child cannot be understated. Though life eventually steps in, those lessons can never truly fade.
Yeah, the 2nd poem does evoke the supernatural. 🙏🏾
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(((Hugs)))
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Beautiful poem with a beautiful message. Only love survives.
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Thank you so much, Indira.
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