Dire predictions
the dimple in a grim smile
Is my resistance
like changing seasons
heedless deeds spin fortune’s wheel
a chain reaction
I see with thine eye
Is this the lover’s edict
hybrid creations
In a lawless world
karma keeps a watchful gaze
the peasant toils on
Inhibited soul
you must bloom in their vision
to grow your wisdom
On a dreamer’s whim
pave new ways to withered ends
that you must rebuild

A Senryu series for Colleen’s TankaTuesday. See if you can pick a favourite.
Also for:
Sadje’s whatdoyousee
Caley’s writephoto
Reena’s xploration challenge.
Tall Tales Corner
We named her Aangaz the village clutz Clumsy to a tear Tinkles trailed her tippytap step pots and pans broke in her wake coins and trinkets fell from her pockets the children chortled with laughter but always returned her lost treasures and how she loved them so One day the earth shook trees fell, roofs collapsed, wildebeests stampeded Many passed, more were injured but none of them children For Aangaz the village clutz Tippytapped through the mayhem Clumsy with everything- except what she truly loved...

Looking forward to your thoughts. I’m still getting a hang on telling tall tales, I’m not writing them just right, but I’ll get better.
Shalom
Namaste
Namarie

Hi Jude, I hope your studies are going well. I love the clutch who loved. 💖
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Thanks so much for appreciating the tale. One more week to finish the semester then I can finish the beta draft for my book🙏🏾🙏🏾
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
You create magic every time, Jude 🙂
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Means a lot, Reena. Thank you.
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Lovely weaving of prompts, Jude. 🙂
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Thank you so much, A. 🤍🌼
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Beautiful symbolism, love it!
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Glad you liked it. Thanks so much.
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You’re welcome.
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Great take on the prompts, Jude. I love the tall tales as well.
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Thanks a lot Michaela🙏🏾🤍😃
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these are great, Jude! I like these lines in particular:
I can relate…
❤
David
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Cheers, David. I had a soft spot for that one as well😁
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also, this:
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I really like that second grouping–“karma keeps awatchful gaze”–I hope that is true! (K)
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Alas, the line that follows it is filled with irony. So I hope it’s true as well, coz it often doesn’t look like it.
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Sadly, no.
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Wow! All of this poetry is so good, Jude. Here’s my favorite:
Inhibited soul
you must bloom in their vision
to grow your wisdom
You captured the essence in all those prompts. Excellent. 💜
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Thank you so much Colleen. 💖
Interesting favourite.🌼🤍
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It’s funny what speaks to us, isn’t it?
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Wonderful senryu series and what a delight your story of the protective spirit after it. Enjoyed all of them.
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Thank you so much, Jade. Glad you liked them.💖
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You’re welcome, Jude.
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Superb take on the prompts, Jude! You’re a pro at weaving magic.
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Oh shucks. I do hope to become a pro one day. But my writing levels up a bit every year.🙏🏾 Thank you for appreciating, Eugi.💖
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My pleasure, Jude! 💖
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You are so talented, Jude! I loved reading your poems.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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This is a beautiful collection, Jude. I would say your writing is very masterful. You create beautiful imagery. Thank you for including the #writephoto prompt among the challenges. KL ❤
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Thank you so much, Caley. It means a lot that you like it.💖💖
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Well done and beautifully said, Jude!
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Thank you so much, Denise💖💖💖
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Delightful reading. Those that seem simple are often full of magic. Perhaps that is the tall tale that those who seek a different reality refuse to believe. For is it not in tall tales where grains of true evolve?
We all get better with practice. Keep enjoying what you do – Continued success with your studies. 💖
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